Saturday, 13 August 2011


This is another one of my OCs, he's going to be used in my Dragona Pine Starting Point fanfic.

Name: Cabader. He has no last name.

Age: 90, looks nothing.

Gender: Male.

Personality: Cabader hardly speaks, he only says something when spoken to or he has an idea. If he's set on a mission, he will complete it under any circumstances and protect his friends whilst doing so. He can kill people with no regret, but will protect the innocent and people who he cares about. In battle he is ruthless and deadly.


Sorry about the mix up with pictures there, I tried to get them right but it didn't work. So, to sum up: Black Motorcycle helmet, a black jacket which he has zipped up all the time, black outdoor/motorcycle trousers, black outdoor gloves and black outdoor boots. He never takes them off, and never changes.

Nationality: English.

Accent: Synthesised and robotic, but more human than the traditional robot voice. Speaks without using apostrophes, like instead of "I'm", "I am."

History: He was a soldier in WWII, fighting on the border between Germany and France. After a successful take-over of an enemy trench, he was shot five times by a German machine gun. He died from his injuries, but his spirit didn't move on.
A few hours after he was killed, his spirit was found by a dark mage called Travisan. Travisan made a body for Cabader out of pieces of a broken soul catcher, Cabader's old uniform and parts of the machine gun that had killed him. His head was the barrel of the machine gun, and his body was infused with magic so that it could operate, and he could fire bullets from his head. His arms could form blades and other assorted weapons. He used his machine gun head to kill the six German soldiers who had killed him.
After getting his revenge, he realised he couldn't remember anything from his previous life except for his death, and became more aware of the world.
He realised that Travisan was about to destroy the world by summoning Faceless Ones to Earth, and set about stopping him.
The fight lasted three hours, and in which time, Cabader suffered twenty two blows to the head, from bolts of magic which Travisan fired at him. He should have died again from his injuries, but he suffered no physical wounds.
To test his newly found immortality, he set himself against another German machine gun. He was hit forty times in the chest and head, but the bullets bounced back at the machine gun and made it explode, killing the soldiers.
He remained in the war until it ended, and then was lonely until the year 1998, where he found a friend.
Cabader met Thor in a bar, when he was 4, and with his mum, despite the fact it is impossible for Cabader to eat or drink. A few years later, when Thor was 9, he found a way to change what Cabader's body looked like, after an accident, and found suitable clothing for him. The clothing Thor gave him is his permenant outfit, but with a few modifications.
The arms are made of metal, and he can sprout blades from his wrists, knuckles, elbows and shoulders. In his forearm, he can slide out the machine gun that killed him and fire bullets from it.
He was an elemental before he died, and traces of his powers remain.
He is only called in by the Sanctuary under extreme circumstances, such as Faceless Ones and possible global destruction.

Powers: Cabader is indestructable to any form of violence that hits him. As he is a spirit wearing clothes, he cannot get hurt. The materials that contain him are indestructable also, so his clothes cannot wear, or get ripped by anything. Blades bend, or bounce off him, bullets are sent back to the person who fired them and bones will break on any violent contact with him. As he was an elemental before he died, he can control fire. It's the only trace of his once great power that remains, but he is a master at it. Oddly, his visor for his helmet glows orange when he controls flames.
Due to the parts of the soul catcher in his clothing, and it contains a good spirit, it glows white instead of throbbing black like ordinary soul catchers. On a night, cracks of white light can be seen through the gaps of his clothing and the last person to call him "The Human Nightlight" was unfortunately killed by a hail of machine gun bullets that hit him in the head at point blank range.

Weapons: As said in the history, Cabader can sprout weapons from his arms due to robotic implants made by Thor, using parts of weapons that Travisan made for him. He is a master at using his machine gun, killing people with blades that he can make shorter or longer to his will, but he can also fire shrukiens at enemies.

Friends: Thor, Kallista Pendragon, Israel Elysium, Grindor Blackout and Aquila Felis. The only people who know of his existence and past who are not part of the sanctuary.

Phrase To Sum Him Up: "He's not a bad guy, he's just a very twisted good guy."

Thursday, 4 August 2011

The Revengors

Okay. This is a creature which is going to appear on my "Dragona Pine :  Starting Point" fanfic, so I thought that I would tell you a bit about it.

The Revengors.

Species Name: The Revengors (pronounced "Revenge-ors.")

Appearance: Can be up to ten metres tall, although most of them are about two or under, they have brown skin with sharp claws and teeth, capable of chewing anything it comes across. They have spikes running down their spine and a club made of bone on the end of their tail. They stand on two legs, but can move quicker on four. They have no visible eyes, but instead rely on sound waves like bats, but much more effective. They can see a pin head at a distance of six miles away.

Home: A planet that Grindor once accidentally made a portal too. They slipped through it and reached Earth. The planet is of unknown location and size.

Language: The Revengors communicate in a series of growls and roars.

Diet: Carnivore.

Behaviour: Ruthless and deadly, will kill anything that moves, and only eat half of what it kills. Mostly pack hunters.

Possible Damage Caused: If a single Revengor was left in London, everyone in it would be dead within a day.

Abilities: The power to create portals, like Grindor Blackout. They can only be summoned by people who can create portals, and teleporters. As well as that, they can only be killed by the person who summoned them, others just slow them down. Even the most powerful of mages can't kill them unless they were the ones who brought them to Earth. Bad news for everyone on the planet if the teleporter or portal-maker is killed.

Intelligence: A bit less than a human, but smart nevertheless. Smart enough to make traps, plan ahead and communicate. If several of them got in our world, they would become the dominant species.